you areight
but I intended to ignore it ..
Anyway , it is my turn to correct your mistakes
" not too much just some errors
It's about "I" in your topic espacialy infirst Participation and repeated in others paragraphs .
in the beginning " to make a sense "
in the other paragraphs
in the others " no need to-ite anything after putting s "
your mistake is abouti is small in error situation
your mistake is just about " I" it is a small error "
do not make longer "
this is what i want to share with you " better tothat's all what I want to share it with youite it in this way "
thanks for your participation and hope you all the best as well ..